We Just Popped Down to Cordoba

Jeff needed to head to Cordoba to pick something up. Something that couldn’t be shipped. And he asked me if I wanted to tag along. Heck yeah! Being an American, and that long road trips are in our DNA, I had my bag packed in 5 minutes and was waiting by the front door at … Read more We Just Popped Down to Cordoba

The Beginning of the End

Today was a day. A monumental day. Jeff got the vaccine. And we did a few other things, too. It started out early, and only 6 hours later we were home again. I like to be early to things. To me, being late is disrespectful and just plain dumb. The early bird catches the worm. … Read more The Beginning of the End

The Hooker and a Bone Scan

Under the heading of ‘What can go wrong, will go wrong’, the last 12 hours have been interesting. It felt a little like we were Tina Fey and Steve Carell in the movie ‘Date Night’. How can so many things stack up against you? We were spending a quiet evening at home watching ‘Drunk History’ … Read more The Hooker and a Bone Scan

I’m Probably Going to Hell for This

I’ve been told I have a ‘Justice Complex’. But I figure if there is one complex to have, justice is not a bad one. And if there’s one thing I can’t stand it’s bullies and boundary-crossers. People who think it’s OK to intentionally make other people’s lives less wonderful, and sometimes much harder, than they need to be. And I just won’t have it. Read more I’m Probably Going to Hell for This

The Power of Disconnection

When we moved to Valencia, everything was different. I felt so bombarded by the differences that any subtlety or shades of grey were completely missed. The things we were dealing with were all primary colors and right in our faces. Now that we’ve lived in Spain for 16 months, I notice other things. Jeff talked … Read more The Power of Disconnection

Update – Beta Readers for The Baker of El Mujandar

August 22, 2022vivaespanamovingtospain

To all those who agreed to be beta readers for my novel, Thank You! Since I am still landing this plane, what I have decided to so is to send it out for your feedback in a serial format. This way it’s more in bite-sized chunks. You can opt out at any time.

As you read it and send feedback I can incorporate it into the next installment before I send it out for more feedback. In this way, you will see your feedback as we go. Certainly glaring plot holes can be fixed. And, who knows, you could influence the direction of a character or a plot line as I edit.

In the next week you should see a an email with the first installment in your inbox. Hopefully, your Spam filter won’t block it.

Thank you, again, for agreeing to read it. I am far too attached to these characters to see them with any objectivity. I hope you will love them as much as I do. 🙏

Stay tuned…

KFD

2 thoughts on “Update – Beta Readers for The Baker of El Mujandar”

Carol Joyner says:

August 23, 2022 at 9:53 am

Can you send it over again? I can’t find it 😫

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- vivaespanamovingtospain says:
  
  August 23, 2022 at 12:26 pm
  
  You aren’t losing it, Carol. I haven’t sent it yet. By Friday🙏
  
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